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I really like the message here, but I agree a little with Regina that the rhymes try to capture all your thoughts and you loose some of the message because of them. I wouldn't change it though, it makes a great rap and if you read it like one it seems better. Thanks, Anthony
I really like it but all the rhyming made me for get what I was reading and I got caught up in all the endings, but I started back from the begging and then I found it quit fulfilling my enjoyment
This is beautiful, and very true. It is us who sit around accusing doing nothing who are truely to blame. I love the rhyme scheme you used for this...it was utterly magnificent.
Though you're wrong...criminals are out there killing, but rapists and murders are getting off too easily, while many people are being put away who should be given clemency. A father shot a man raping his daughter and was sent to prison for murder. Is that right?
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