Burning Desire
by
Jack Curson
(Age: 32)
copyright 09-09-2005
Age Rating: 18 to 127
Into the mind of burning desire
Wrestling thoughts of this tigress’ flesh
Captivated by a beastly scent
Lusting for the taste of this animals essence
A passionate reprimand caresses a flowering blossom
Entangled in a masterful feast
This she-wolfs’ natural breath escapes
Grasping the rears of this animals back
This beast of aphrodisia thrusts his sword,
Penetrating deeply within this carnal union.
Rhythmically feeding a sensual fervor
Tousling about, wrestling,
Drawing near to the animals’ apex,
Rooting her claws, breaking silence
A ravenous moan burst into the moonlight.
Lingering tastes of orgasm fills the vixen delightfully.
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There's a lot of deep and complex thoughts going on here. I will have to read it a few more times to sort it out.This was good musically and rhythmically.
Jack, I am totally lost here! Who's doing the mating? You mention the tigress and then you mention the she wolf. In one of your sentences, I think you meant, "breath." At the end of the poem, you make a very awkward statement, "erotica rides again." To me, this cheapens the whole scenario you've so eloquently described. I'm totally befuddled here. Please email me and explain this piece. Please!
This is not something I would have expected from you, but it was as David pointed out...rather heated! I enjoyed the read, maybe a little too much. I'm feeling dirty and I need one of those cold showers! Anthony
She sounds like an animal all right. You have certainly bought out the animal passion in this piece --- hot! I think I'll go take a cold shower right now.