Ice Senshi
by
Kat Voletto
(Age: 23)
copyright 09-12-2005
Age Rating: 7 to 127
Blue eyes dance with ethereal blue light
Risking her life to cease a friend's plight
Never stopping, even as days grow old
Her cool demeanor keeping her bold
Sailor Mercury: forever fighting for what's right!
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Although you could have made this quite a bit longer, I feel that it would have detered from the poem. Short, sweet, and to the point seem to get it done here. And it does show the reason that she fights.
Good job.
The last line, "Fighting for the right," left me up in the air. What did you mean? Fighting for the right as opposed to the left (as in politics)? Or fighting for righteousness?