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Dear Ol' Melissa Contest Entry
by Sam Hackel-Butt
copyright 09-13-2005
Contest Winner


Age Rating: 7 to 127

 
As Melissa approached the office, she slowed her merry skip to a shuffled walk as a lady in a gray suit stood, watching her. Instantly, she felt uncomfortable. She wanted to run back to class, but she couldn’t, because she found herself in front of the lady.
“Melissa,” she began, getting on her knees in front of the girl so she could see eye to eye with her. “My name is Miss Cafert, sweetie. I’m going to be taking care of you for a few days.”
“What about my mommy and daddy? Do they know?”
Miss Cafert’s face bore a contorted expression of pain as she said: “Your parents were in an accident, sweetie.”
Melissa wasn’t listening as Miss Cafert explained about the drunk driver that plowed into her parents’ car, or that they were both still alive, but in bad shape at the hospital. She couldn’t really think of much as ghastly images filled her head as her eyes filled with tears. Miss Cafert took her hand gently, and led her from the school to a small car.
“Everything is going to be OK, sweetie. Your parents will be fine.”

And for once in her life, she was lied to. Her father recovered quickly enough sporting a chunky cast on his arm and had a Frankenstein-like appearance because of stitches needed to close large gashes in his forehead. Her mother took longer, being in a coma, and feared to never wake. The toughest thing Melissa had to ever do was to stand in the room with her family as life support was ended, and her mother slipped away. Miss Cafert was with her, holding her tiny trembling hand as machines were turned off, and removed as Melissa’s family stood silent and still.

When she looked back on that day, all she could remember was the beeping of equipment, the tone quickening with her heart as her mothers’ failed. She was dumbfounded. She couldn’t eat, she couldn’t speak, and she could barely keep her head up when she wasn’t laying down, or reclining on the couch, which was often. She didn’t even shed a tear. Not even when she was older and grown to accept that her mother was gone, she watched her die, and never even got to say goodbye.




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03-24-2007 Christina Johnson    

I like this note very much good work and it's very very sad.


04-29-2006 Octavia Miles    

Oh my...

This is so sad... i wouldn't want this to happen to me either...good job. But in the last sentence.. I was thinking maybe it should be "she 'had' watched her die" not just "she watched her die". Simply because "she watched her die" sounds like it's currently happening, not that it happened in the past. And it did happen in the past, from the time frame you were writing about in that paragraph. Still a good job overall, though.


10-04-2005 Eleni Makarios    

I read this and I thought oh dear. I started to cry, and I am still watching a tear dry up on my table as I write this. This is so touching, Samantha. It is clear that you have felt like this is some way, because this is a very hard story to write unless you've been through it some way or another.


09-24-2005 Euna P.    

O.O

I couldn't even imagane that happening to me. I don't really want to know what it feels like either.

Good job


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