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The Longing

by Roger Crique (Age: 56)
copyright 09-13-2005


Age Rating: 13 +
The Longing
Picture Credits: http://www.theatrehistory.com/ british/romeoandjuliet...


Oh, what divide?
In my cradle thee must lie
In thy bosom thus digress
Right back to thy divide

For poison of the sweetest kind
Thy passion in my wake revives
To die for thee I shall
in thy passionate divide

For your crest I shall implore
Insanity I crave no more
For thy sweetest of divide
It is thee I wish explore

Oh, blades of all they Nobles
In my chest they shall decree
For thy depths I must deplore
lest I consume thy virgin spree

My heart for thee shall always mark
Ere, hours of thy lovely days
For in my deepest sense embark
The calm of thy tempestuous ways






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        10-10-2005     Regina Pate        

Hmm... Who are you talking about here. I love it very much, and no I don't think it could be better. This was written from your heart and I like it the way it is lol anyway good job great write. Thank you

your Regina

        09-14-2005     James Shammas        

I like the Renaissance or Shakespearean sound to this, though I'm not sure it all connects or is communicated coherently to me. I'm not sure how to utilize the word "divide" in my reading of it, though this may be my own ignorance of its usage. Incidentally, I think "rivive" in 2nd stanza should be "revive" unless this is a middle English or Renaissance version of the word.
Overall, I like it, but it could be better.



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