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I agree with Rich; a small, cute poem. Just for Laughs would be an appropriate title. Outline the symbolic intentions and content! :) Cute poem, Angela!
I like this, its very forward. Like most poems have hidden meanings this one just comes right out and tells you things. I would go with a title like "What of Tomorrow?" or "Where is Tomorrow?" But it's your poem so its up to you. Keep up the good work.
You know what? I read Anthony's title before I came up with a title and so I go with his. Since his is so cool, I can't keep my mind off of his long enough to come up with mine. I also think that his idea would make it really cute, you know,
We laugh about the old,
We laugh about the new,
We say "The future is now",
But then,
What's tomorrow to do?
It makes it sound like a nursery rhyme. Though, if you want a more serious title, go with Debra's, hers is cool too. And more serious.
Everyone has an opinion and I am no different. While this poem would benefit by all the others suggestions, I will walk out on the plank and say that I think the last line would be better as, "What's tomorrow to do?" Then the title would be the last line you have, "What's Tomorrow?" Some call me strange, but I prefer to be known as different! Anthony
I was going to enter your contest for this, but I agree with Debra on this one. "What is Tomorrow" should be the last line and the title. Very, very nice work. Keep it up!
I like where this poem is going. It is well written and the end question leaves one thinking of the possibilities...I would change the second, "We laugh about..." I would change it to something like, "We ponder about..." As a matter of fact, I wouldn't say, "We," I would say, "I." "I laugh about..." Make it your own personal experience. I would call this poem, "I wonder."
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