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The Evil Plastic Container
by Euna P. (Age: 15)
copyright 09-23-2005


Age Rating: 1 to 127

 
I had a new pen.
It was an exciting thing
with a laser pointer
on the opposite end.

It was bright red
with a gold band around the middle
and a black part
encircling the laser.

There was one problem with it.
It was in a plastic container.
It was a long and thin plastic container
that held extra batteries for the laser.

It held the pen too
in a velvety feeling sort of material
and it was grayish
that looked nice with the red.

I tried to open it.
I put my fingernails in the crack
and pulled and hurt myself.
It refused to open.

I got mad at it.
I tried again.
My fingernails protested
to the ill treatment.

I pulled
and tugged
and tried
and it hurt.

I got frustrated
and wrinkled my forehead.
I was getting angery
and began pulling it more.

I broke a nail
and the rest of them hurt really bad.
But I wanted to play with the laser pointer
so I tried again.

It was really hard, and my fingers hurt
and I tried so hard
I dropped it on the floor
and that's when I realized...




The plastic container opened at the other end.


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07-06-2006 Tammy Frascona    

I just read this one for the first time and I have to say I too related to it.And guess what that happens to me more often then I would like to admit, but to hear it come from someone else, it's comforting to know I'm not the only one. Also I found it humorous as anything. I loved it


02-06-2006 Vicki G.    

OMG- I totally rolled around on the floor laughing when I read this. Like, literally. I mean, I saw dust bunnies I hadn't seen in a looong time. This is just so funny! I mean, it's perfect for a day when you're feeling really stressed.


12-13-2005 Leigh G.    

lol! Very funny. Yeah, that must of sucked. Like Lyra said the title attracted me. lol, good choice people remember it and wonder. You can lower the age rating though Good work!


11-06-2005 Lyra M.    

XD Ow, that must hurt. It was thetitle that attracted me. "The Evil Plastic Container" People wonder.


10-12-2005 Eleni Makarios    

I'm sorry, I just HAD to come back and read this again. I was feeling down today, and thought this would be the perfect remedy. it was! Right now I have three other girls from my class reading it too and they like it!
Lena: Helo I love this poem!
Maria: I think this is very funny. Good work.
Good job again, Euna!


10-09-2005 Erin G.    

hey Euna!

I loved this poem, especially the end, that is so funny! OMG, I went iceskating once, and you had to pull the door, and I was pushing, and it was really making me mad...and then my crush came up and was like...Uhh, you have to pull it...I was SOOO embarrassed, and now he remembers me as the girl who couldn't open the door...how EmBaRrAsSing...uggh...lol

great job!

~Erin


09-24-2005 Jenna T.    

Hahaha, I can definitely relate to this poem. Plastic containers are always Evil...EVIL!!!! They manage to fool the human mind somehow...every SINGLE TIME. Great work!!!

Jenna T.


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