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Title for Angela T.
by
Anthony Lane Stahlhut
(Age: 52)
copyright 09-18-2005
Contest Winner
Age Rating: 4 +
Everyone has an opinion and I am no different. While this poem would benefit by all the others suggestions, I will walk out on the plank and say that I think the last line would be better as, "What's tomorrow to do?" Then the title would be the last line you have, "What's Tomorrow?" Some call me strange, but I prefer to be known as different! Anthony
What's Tomorrow
We laugh about the old,
We laugh about the new,
We say," The future is now,"
But then,
What's tomorrow to do?
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