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How Come (Dear Moon)
by
Alma H.
(Age: 15)
copyright 11-13-2005
Age Rating: 7 to 127
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** I was thinking this one up last night when I was staring at the full moon.After awhile I realized I was talking.**
How come the moon shines,
how come people whine?
How come the wide meadow grass is green,
how come people can be so cruel and mean?
These questions might never be answered,
some things we have must be surrendered.
How can people be lonely,
even if the world is with me?
Why must people have boyfriends,
even if they're uglier than all ends?
Dear moon please tell me,
why must I be so lonely?
Please come back,come back and stay.
don't you ever again go away.
I wish I would like to say,
"Why,oh,why must I feel this way?"
The feeling of loneliness is always with me,
while everybody talks about their boyfriend around
me.
I don't get it, why am I so lonely
It makes me so bluey.
These questions might never be answered,
My whole life is a blizzard.
Good night.
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04-23-2006 Caitlin N.
I liked it if you wanna hear another story about heart break check out my page.
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03-19-2006 Shannon W.
this was nice. it really spoke to me.
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03-01-2006 Brittney N. N.
Nice work. It's got a farely good flow, however not every line has to ryhme. I understand poetry is about improvising, but there really is not need to make up ryhmes such as, "I don't get it, why am I so lonely It makes me so bluey." Your work would be fine without all rhyming. Other then that, good job.
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01-02-2006 Lauren T.
Great work!I love how it flows and that its also a lot of questions that many people want to know.
I share the want to know the answer to why people kill eachother. Great work.
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12-22-2005 Leigh G.
Wow, this is a very good and creative poem! It flows very nicely too. And you're not alone. I don't have a boyfriend either. And I don't need one. They may be fun but in the end you'll feel pain. Unless he's the one. Sadly, that guy isn't showing his face anytime soon for me, But we all have someone fore us, and he'll show up soon enough :) Good work, you write nicely. :) I like the picture too, it's fitting. Even though you could end some of the verses in question marks, it would make it flow better.
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12-15-2005 Haley R.
Wow! This one is flowing and nice. And, your right, it's like people will almost anything to have a boyfriend. Well to make you feel better, I don't have a boyfriend. And you know what, I really don't care that I don't have one. Either way, everyone has someone special waiting for them, just some have to wait longer than others...
Anyway, good job, and remember, there is someone for everyone, just it might take a while for that person to show up.
Great poem, and remember:
Girl Power! (Alright, that sounds a little corny...XP)
Bye
None Other than,
Haley
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12-09-2005 Jane L.
WOW!~ This is REALLY good. ^^ I wonder a lot why people whine and stuff. Its annoying. -.-
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