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~"The Pastor's Page"~
by Jeniffer Brand (Age: 38)
copyright 09-18-2005

Age Rating: 7 to 127

What was it that you saw in me when you looked into my eyes?
Could you tell I was a stray and that I was living in lies?

You knew when you first met me that something wasn't right.
And as the years flew by you never left me out of your sight.

Finally giving in I slowly started to trust you.
"She'll find her path", this "God" already knew.

I knocked on your door and shyly asked you for guidance.
Not knowing one day I'd look up to you for reliance.

You just took me by the hand and gently showed me the way.
Even gave me a Bible, and a book, which shows you how to pray.

Since then you've become my mentor, my spiritual rock.
And opening that door to me, whenever I knock.

In this I'm young, naive, and dumb, I have a long way to go.
But what you're really doing for me you may never even know!

I do believe there's a reason we met.
It was "God", this I finally get.

Just don't leave me now, no matter how much the strain.
It's you I trust, and the "Lord" that I will gain!

Thank you!
Love,
Jenny

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10-09-2005 Regina Pate

Thank you for sharing your new beginnings and for being so honest, I am sure it will help others along the way, he will help you if you let him, I can see you know that and I am glad. Good luck!

Gina

09-19-2005 Anthony Lane Stahlhut

Faith is very powerful and once found can be a great catalyst to greater things. This is a nice poem and I enjoyed the read! Anthony

09-18-2005 Roger Crique

You're missing a few commas in a few key places and I would not use quotation marks for effect, it interrupts the flow. Aside from that, this poem is very powerful in it's delivery and eloquence. It clearly visualizes the struggles that the author has gone through and it makes a valiant attempt at recognizing that life can be hopeful, if one looks in the right place and for the right guide. The author's sincerity is clearly felt and so is the ever present vulnerability that the author has to endure. Peace be with you.

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~"The Pastor's Page"~ by Jeniffer Brand (Age: 38) copyright 09-18-2005 Age Rating: 7 to 127

~"The Pastor's Page"~
by Jeniffer Brand (Age: 38)
copyright 09-18-2005

Age Rating: 7 to 127