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Twelve Years
by Victoria Medley (Age: 20)
copyright 09-20-2005


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He's twelve years my senior,
with dark blond hair,
a smile, an accent,
a penetrating stare.

He's twelve years my senior,
with skin so fair,
and me, seventeen,
an interesting pair.

He's twelve years my senior,
with wisdom to share,
a secret, a promise,
his soul to bare.

He's twelve years my senior,
a love so rare,
a kiss, a touch,
a whispered dare.

He's twelve years my senior,
with my world to tear,
his voice, his scent,
I see him everywhere.

And while my parents may frown,
as my world turns upside down,
He's twelve years my senior,
and I don't care.




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10-30-2005 Alma H.    

That is really robing the cradle but when you say 12 years my senior, do you mean that's old he is or how many years apart you are?
09-21-2005 Anthony Lane Stahlhut    

The age difference won't be a problem when your 25, but when your 17 there are laws against it for reasons. An 30 year old man and a 17 year old child, there is something wrong here! I hope he proves me wrong, but I think in time he will be proving you wrong! I grew up fast and my first wife was 7 years my senior. It didn't seem like much at first, but later it really hurt our relationship and I'm afraid it will yours too. Be careful. I hope you are the one in a million, but the odds are not in your favor! I feel your torment, but I also think you are setting yourself up for disaster.Tell your parents you love them, you may need a soft place to fall! Anthony
09-21-2005 Victoria Medley    

The repetition of "He's twelve years my senior" was meant to be a motif, but thank you for your comments. ^_^
09-21-2005 Roger Crique    

This is a very eloquent poem, a poem with a purpose. 12 Years is not a big deal. When you're 80, he'll be 92! The repetition of, "He's twelve years my senior," is overdone. It is not necessary. It interrupts the flow of the poem. I would just use it one time. Your ending is great and it brings the whole poem together!
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