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Eternal Snow

by Mika Lee (Age: 20)
copyright 09-21-2005


Age Rating: 1 +

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This is a song I made up when i got bored in LA class.. Its my first song but please tell me what u think
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A single flake of snow
falling onto the ground
leaves all these feelings
piling up inside me

Listen to these words
all of these emotions they show
can you understand
all this sadness I feel

Can you be the one
to cure all of this pain
all of these scars
that others left behind
can you
let this white snow,
continue falling...

Is this the feeling of hatred
or perhaps this is sadness
maybe this is sorrow
or maybe a bit of happiness

With every flake of snow
leaves me thinking,
what do these feelings mean?
what can I do?

Can you be the one
to cure all of this pain
all of these scars
others left behind
can you
let this white snow,
continue falling...

The snow drifts down
slowly,
gently,
quietly

Let this white snow,
continue forever...

Can you be the one
to cure all of this pain
all of these scars
others left behind
can you let this snow,
fall enternally...






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        11-24-2005     hedwig        

WRITE MORE POEMS WHEN YOUR BORED IN LAL CLASS! lol I loved this.

        10-21-2005     Paul Gardner        

THIS IS A GREAT POEM 10 OUT OF TEN


        09-25-2005     Charlotte Soffner        



        09-21-2005     Anthony Lane Stahlhut        

This sounds good and could be a great song with the right arrangement! Write more often, you're good at it! Anthony

        09-21-2005     Roger Crique        

Mika, I think this is a very lovely song. It would also make a lovely poem. I just would like to see you put question mark in very question, that would make it a better song. Your lyrics are very well thought out. What type of song is it? Is it slow, fast....

        09-21-2005     Mika Lee        

Wow this is the first song I've ever written, I thought, this was pretty good for my first try.... I just wanted to post something since its been a long time since i last wrote



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