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Desire

by Debra Rose (Age: 26)
copyright 09-22-2005


Age Rating: 18 +

The world is lit ablaze
when there is passion in your eyes.
Slipping subtly between my fingers--
flowing down betwixt your thighs.
I'll play you like a violin,
make you scream at brand new highs,
The world is lit ablaze
when there is passion in your eyes.




I want to continue this, but I'm not exactly sure what I want the next verse to be :) Suggestions would be great






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        08-03-2006     Robert Joseph Hughes        

This is a very lovely poem! I love the gentle passion and soft desire in this poem. I feel that this poem doesn't need rhyme or rhythm, it speaks with love and desire instead. There is no need to add more to this lovely poem. I enjoyed reading your poem very much.

        07-12-2006     BJ Niktabe        

I agree with the others. This poem needs no more. You've said it all. I wouldn't change a thing!

Thank you, Debra for pointing out your poems to me. They are very intense, and I can see the similarities you spoke of.

BJ :)

        11-11-2005     Roger Crique        

I like the play on words Deone used, "Anti-climatic!" Hmmm. And I must concur with her statement. No need for additional stanzas. This stands like truth does, alone! Great poem.



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