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Eric Gasparich
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I Love You
by Mika L. (Age: 15)
copyright 09-24-2005


Age Rating: 7 to 127

 
Every minute
every second of my life
all wasted on you
just for you

All this pain in my heart
all this suffering
just to be next to you
just to be with you

Why do you think I would of done this?
why do you think I care?
does it really seem that hard to realize?
the fact that,
I love you,
is why...

Being next to you causes me pain
but being away from you,
causes me suffering
and thats when I realize

Why i it that my feelings keep being a burden
why did I just realize
I cant live without you
without shedding a tear

Why do you think I would of done this?
why do you think I care?
does it really seem that hard to realize?
the fact that,
I love you,
is why...

I cant hide it anymore
I cant just keep running
I have to tell you
I just have to let you know

Why do you think I would of done this?
why do you think I care?
does it really seem that hard to realize?
the fact that,
I love you,
is why...

Because,
I Love You...


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11-26-2005 Anne-marie Hewlett    

It's good, just a few errors but good.


11-16-2005 Lyra M.    

Sigh...Love...>.< I've forgotten love.


10-20-2005 Paul Gardner    

great poem keep up the good work



09-26-2005 Sage B.    

Very well written. You have some errors though you need to capitalize an I in the nineteenth line. Also try to keep with your punctuation you satrt out with comma's but don't continue.


09-25-2005 Jenna T.    

I like this. Very pretty and well-written. Keep it up!


09-25-2005 Charlotte S.    

I like this, it's very.. strong.
I havn't read your Eternal Snow yet..



09-24-2005 Mika L.    

I'm getting really addicted on making songs which is sorta weird, but I hope you like this one, but I sorta think my other one Enternal Snow is...better than this


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