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Primrose Lane
by Anthony Lane Stahlhut (Age: 47)
copyright 09-29-2005


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  Primrose Lane
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Wit and wisdom fail me now
for I just can't find the word.
But of course its been said before
and this I'm sure you've heard.

It puts together many things
from roses to candle light.
Every single time alone
whether it was wrong or right.

A visit to some distant place.
A walk down Primrose Lane.
Memories of times gone by
all the joy and all the pain.

When you two were together.
Far off and all alone.
Seeing far into the sky,
from cloud to cloud you'd roam.

From at the bottom or near the top,
ever society's place may be.
Their guidance didn't affect your sight,
for each other was all you could see.

But if wit and wisdom fail me now
then I shall never find.
The word that I'm looking for
and its on the tip of my mind.

It puts together many things
from roses to candle light.
Every single time alone
whether it was wrong or right.

A visit to some distant place.
A walk down Primrose Lane.
Memories of times gone by.
All the joy and all the pain.

Ah the answer, there it is.
Smoke clearing so I can see.
The answer was there all the time.
For Love is what it must be!


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11-04-2005 Mehrina B.    

Nice, really nice. I really think it's awing how you can write poetry like that. And it's really incredible how you were able to keep that rhyme!
I'm sorry, I'm having problems with my points.
Or I would have given a round 5!
10-07-2005 Amanda Guthrie    

It is very sweet,obviously inspired by the event in the photo, she is a lucky girl, not all girls have a man that writes them poetry!
Amanda
10-02-2005 Regina Pate    

another song Anthony really, I love it, more, please, That is so sweet, what a treat, how did you meet?
10-02-2005 Gregory Christiano    

Really nostagic. I actually got a lump in my throat, because the title and story are so vivid and we can all relate to it.
10-01-2005 Walter Jones    

Out of the past a mind triger...Life is a holiday on Primrose Lane with you... I enjoyed the poem, but more the spirit, you gave life to these words, nicely done... this is one you will want to save and return to. Many opportunities to massage into a epic or a start to warm love story... Best day you can find.. Walt
10-01-2005 David Pekrul    

The word "love" is such a small word, but brings so many different images and feelings; diffent things to diffent people.
Nicely expressed.
09-30-2005 Roger Crique    

This is a bit confusing to me, and I'm sorry if I over-analyze, I've been accused of that. The first three stanzas are lovely, witty and very well written. After that, the poem takes a peculiar turn. The point of view changes and some lines become repetitive. Because some lines repeat, the poem becomes a bit long and the fluidity that existed in the first three stanzas, disappear in the subsequent six.
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