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It's Over
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by Leigh G. (Age: 14)
copyright 09-30-2005


Age Rating: 10 to 127

 
Over
The battle's done
I can replace my sword in it's scabbard
The blood shed is over
My family is safe
I fought for them
And I won
And now it's Over
I am not a child any longer
I have killed more men then I can count
But, I still have my one life
Why?
Blood has stained my sword
And my soul
I did it for honorable reasons
Yet I still hold regrets
I am a hero to my family and country
But it's all wrong
I don't want praise for killing
I know I can't go back in time
I must go forward
To my happy family
A family that still loves me
I can't go back now
All I can do is look one last time at the body strewn battle field
And the only words that heal the pain in my heart are




"It's Over"




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05-11-2006 D.j. Feutz    

verry good and different at the same time wish i could say the same or maby i am talking tit different but o well i gess i will come back later
~DJ
10-24-2005 Lauren T.    

so sad, Battle is so harsh and it is a life changing experience. This is so powerful, HOW do you write this beatiful poetry? Anyway good work, its awsome. I wouldn't change it at all
10-07-2005 Anthony Lane Stahlhut    

You made the right changes and this sounds great! Anthony
10-07-2005 Jenna T.    

This is great; very powerful and full of meaning. Excellent work!
10-07-2005 Anthony Lane Stahlhut    

This has to be on the mind of returning Men and Women. War is a bad thing and even those that are on the winning side, loose. The lives they were forced to take come back in their dreams and haunt them. I wish we could find a better way to handle disputes, but man is still learning and we can still hope! Good job, Anthony
10-04-2005 Charlotte S.    

I like this, nice ending =)
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