Now That It's Through (No -E- Poem)
by
Mary -BrytEyz- Ball
(Age: 38)
copyright 09-28-2001
Age Rating: 1 to 127
David Taub issued a challenge at WrittenByMe.com to write a love poem without the letter "e" in it. It sure looked easier than it was. :) He proffered a couple fine examples himself to show it could be done, and done well at that. My reply to him donned not an "e" as did my answer to his challenge.
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NOW THAT IT'S THROUGH
Lost and solitary I cry
What do I do without him?
Still stumbling around, I try
Occasions for bliss worn thin
Many misty thoughts try to call
It's all lost in cognition
No crowing in front of this fall
from such a lofty position
I can't find any words to troll
That say just what I harbor
Is it a sword within my soul
Upon a spit and arbor
I lost all that I thought I had
dry as sand in baking sun
But still, for what it's worth, I'm glad
now that all's said and not won
Lost and solitary I sigh
Knowing what to do without him
Stop stumbling around and try
to go on donning my grin
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My reply to him also had no letter "e" in it... here is what I said to that great poet in the UK...
You did a job hard to do,
and did it grandly I might add.
This may turn out copy cats,
and just might turn into a fad.
I can't think of many words
to say thoughts without an "e",
but this try was writ smoothly.
Kudos to your ability!
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ARL: Why, you make me blush! (*grin*) And I bet you could do this, if you put your mind to it. There is a story I often read to my children about a little blue engine that could... :)
CLB: Ahhh... but to amaze you is a feat in and of itself that pleases me like no other. Take care, and I'll try my best to do it again and again and again... :)
Thank you for reading, and for taking the time to comment for those who choose to do so. And thanks Robert for pointing that out to me. :) Any more advice? I can use all I can get!!! LOL>
I enjoyed this poem. I bet it was quite a job but as amother of two boys you can do anything. I found that out as I have two boys of my own. I hope that continue writing. I wrote all the time while my boys were growing but didn't have an outlet until now. Thanks for sharing!