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The Boy Within
by David Pekrul
copyright 10-04-2005
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Age Rating: 10 to 127

 
The small boy falls and hurts his elbow and his knees,
and quietly cries on the inside,
because there is no one there to feel his pain,
or give him comfort,
for the small boy is 86 years old.

His skin is wrinkled and his bones are frail,
but the 'small boy' in him still lives with the same wonders,
fears and insecurities,
that age alone will never erase.

He picks himself up off the floor and stumbles to his easy-chair,
nursing a bruised arm and scraped knees,
then, closing his eyes,
he dreams of simpler times.

Through teen-aged eyes,
he watches the young girls walk down the street,
talking and giggling,
with their long hair swaying,
and their hips swinging,
causing the swirling of their skirts
to show off their tanned, trimmed legs.

He remembers the days when he loved to keep their company,
and flirt with them as they teased in return.
He found them to be fascinating,
exciting,
more interesting than being with the guys,
who only knew how to discuss cars, sports,
and, of course, girls,
but mostly in an unflattering and disrespectful way.

He had never had any trouble speaking with these lovely creatures,
until the day when a very special one caught his attention,
and he knew he was in love.
He remembers suddenly becoming speechless,
flinching when she glanced his way,
unable to look in her eyes,
and feeling a hot flush when she caught him staring.

He remembers shyly approaching her,
and the relief and excitement he felt when she responded.
Then there were the long walks,
and even longer talks,
as they held hands,
and were eventually entwined in passion.

He is old now,
and can only admire these angels from afar,
through eyes that never age.
He is a harmless old man,
but he can no longer approach them,
nor listen to their cheerful banter,
or admire their beauty up close,
or smell the fragrance of their perfume,
as it drifts through the air.

He sees himself through eyes of reason,
with trembling hands and shuffling feet,
isolated from his surroundings,
as people pass by,
unaware of his presence.

Yet, while his mind retraces the past,
remembering skinned knees and pretty girls,
a smile passes his lips.


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12-09-2006 Jane L.    

WOW... Beautiful poem... I'm just speachless. WoW... its going to be hard to choose the winner.


11-13-2005 Mary -BrytEyz- Ball    

Sad, beautiful, and true! I swear it's a costume party each day I look in the mirror. I always see myself as a giggle ridden little girl. Instead I see an ever changing, always sagging, continually aging me instead. I feel like if I could only take off the mask, everyone would see the girl that's really me! I don't know why I don't manage to get to each and every one of your works, because I love each one I manage to get to. Thank you for sharing this, for baring your soul, and for letting us in on pieces of your life. Every work's a gem, every collection a treasure!


10-07-2005 Amanda Guthrie    

It matters not be it poem or prose
I am happy to have read it
anyway as the saying goes
no biggie, just don't sweat it!
I am glad to have read this, it twisted my heart into knots! ~Amanda~


10-07-2005 Brian Dickenson    

Whatever label is attached to this piece matters not a jot.
I have not reached that age yet, but I do hope that I will, and will still be able swing a golf club.
What you have described starts long before the age you give, believe me, I do speak from experience.
When we were younger we were studs, everyone tended to applaud this.
As one gets older, although mentally one stays near the same. If one were to tease and flirt, one would be considered a dirty old man.
But the youth inside remembers.
Brian.



10-06-2005 Deone Wiley    

Free verse is not really free. It does release the poet from the stringent rules of rhyme and form. But if it reads like prose, it is prose. Poetic diction requires some cadence, that is, a structure that brings a pattern to the stressed and unstressed syllables in a word. There should be a tightness of language which prose does not have. I like your idea and can empathize with it. It is not, to me, a poem.


10-04-2005 Anthony Lane Stahlhut    

Wow, have you been taking a creative writing course or something? This was so different from what you usually write, but please do more! I am not the greatest fan of free verse, but I am your fan! I remember my grandfather still building swings at 84. Then he wasn't able to any more and all went down hill. Thank you this is great. What a way to make a comeback! Anthony


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