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Creation Or Evolution?
by David Pekrul
copyright 10-06-2005


Age Rating: 7 to 127

 
What makes people postulate,
That evolution was the state,
When early man first made the scene,
With monkeys somewhere in between?

To think we swung upon a vine,
And were not made by One divine,
Is really such a mystery,
Away back in our history.

I think it's very logical,
And nothing so zoological,
That we were made by God's own breath,
And of His wisdom we were blessed.

I know the One who gave us life,
We came from Adam and his wife,
To live our lives in gratitude,
And yet God gave us latitude.

He said we can believe or not,
So in this quandary we are caught,
To trust His word and what He said,
Or all the other things we've read.

Believe in what you think is right,
For I'm not here to start a fight,
But I will trust in God above,
And know He made us with His love.


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10-09-2005 Regina Pate    

It is said that in the beginning there was the word and the word was with God and the word was God. And being a writer, I believe what is written, that I can put my hands on and I know the truth, I know what I feels like, I have felt it all my life, everything else is just counter fit, I don't know about you but I know I didn't come from no monkey, monkey see monkey do! See no evil, hear no evil, speak no evil and live on that is the truth, can you feel it, and what you speak it the truth also, I can feel that, good job, thank you

Gina


10-09-2005 Roger Crique    

Man can spend a fortune in search of knowledge, but if he does not acknowledge a simple fact of life and that is that there must be a plan for anything worth building, then his search for knowledge is fruitless! Simply stated, Evolution cannot happen by itself! We are quick to recognize a maker for a fine time piece, such as a Movado, or Gruen. If we open one of these, we'll quickly notice that it is filled with precision parts. But guess what, so are we! Yet some supposedly educated individuals will quickly dismiss that we were created and if they do admit to our creation, they will quickly point the finger at a faceless evolution, what a joke! I like your diligence here, David. Your point it well taken. There are those who will never see a lit candle in the darkest of rooms. There is nothing we can do about that! The imagery in this poem is vivid and serves its purpose. The theme is a hotly debated one still. The fluidity stumbles at the end, in my opinion. I stumbled on the last line.


10-06-2005 Amanda Guthrie    

I absolutely loved this. I live with the king of the atheists' and this is a constant battle in our house, how nice to have something so enjoyable to read, that can lighten the issue a bit and proving we are right about creation at the same time(wink) We are so blessed to be able to think like this, and create like this, how could it not be with Gods help?
Love to see more of your work,


10-06-2005 Anthony Lane Stahlhut    

You ask a lot of good questions and so did Deone! Thanks, Anthony


10-06-2005 Deone Wiley    

Is it possible that evolution was God's creation?


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