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Mr. Potato Head Explained
by Regina Pate (Age: 29)
copyright 10-06-2005

Age Rating: 18 to 127

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Regina Pate ate
the heal of a loaf of bread
and now she has some more or less
She has a scar around her head

Everywhere she has to go or read death always takes her breath

This little story might not make sense
but to go over her every verb
would be every reason she had to observe

In my defense
I know it is all nonsense
but I know it is in my sub conscience

I am trying to write, I am trying to rhyme
But trying to hard to follow this time

What did you say?
What do you mean?
Open your eyes try and believe!

Faces so shallow, and faces dimensional
Make these faces of trips to open the penial

Gland of the witches
land of the bitches, stitches, and switches, ditches
tree faces

This is still not

In my eyes that are my own
In my eyes that are my own

My own two eyes
I spy
two tone stones
and stones I stand alone

All alone
road of the lonely
if only the lonely
really awake

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05-08-2006 Richard Reed Jr

All alone
road of the lonely
if only the lonely
really awake

The lonely dream of a fulfilling wakefulness.

This had extremely clever rhyming from top to bottom. And I think I know what your trying to tell the community.

You know some of my poems break poetic rules and some people tear me to pieces for that.
But I say as long as you entertain and communicate, there are no rules to poetry.
Although the way you arrange words may sound better to some peoples ears.
That's OK, but criticism just for the sake of criticism sucks!!!!!!!!!!!

Rich

05-07-2006 Mary -BrytEyz- Ball

Not sure what the poem means, but as for the comments... I couldn't agree more. It does't matter what anyone else thinks, especially if you are writing for yourself. I love the constructive criticism I receive as I write for the masses (in hopes of being published) and treasure their feeback on my work. If I like what I read from them, I incorporate it and adjust accordingly. If I feel they are simply off base I shrug and laugh it off. YOu can never take it too seriously, for just as two people will describe the same incident from two different perspectives, so too with different people read into what you've written assorted perspectives based solely on their own experiences in life. :-) Continue writing with abandon, and enjoy life. :-)

BrytEyz of the Commenting Crusaders

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Mr. Potato Head Explained by Regina Pate (Age: 29) copyright 10-06-2005 Age Rating: 18 to 127

Mr. Potato Head Explained
by Regina Pate (Age: 29)
copyright 10-06-2005

Age Rating: 18 to 127