03-24-2010
Emily Valle
Wow. I loved the way you ended this. I didn't expect that at all but it was really great.
The regret was strongly expressed in a way that made the reader feel like they were the one with the regret. Very easy to get into this one!
Good work.
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12-22-2005
Jordan Screws
Another superb dark poem. You have a true talent for writing about the darker things in life, and you communicate them in an efficient and precise manner. I see no real mistakes with this, so you can congratulate yourself on another success! Keep up the good work!
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11-06-2005
Mehrina Butt
Dark Poems keep you up, Leigh! This was a great poem. I especially liked how you so subtly related to a special ability. But please try to fix those errors! *ha ha*
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10-24-2005
Lauren Turner
This has such meaning to it, Its great.....:( Its sad too but I like sad stuff. Good work!
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10-20-2005
Sage Bruce
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10-19-2005
Haley S.
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10-19-2005
Haley S.
I agree with sage I'll do the same thing to you email me and tell me the problems and I'll give you ten points when youn fix them
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10-13-2005
Sage Bruce
I see alot of errors here. I'll e-mail you. when you fix it I'll give you points
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10-12-2005
Sam Hackel-Butt
I appreciate this so much Leigh, you can't even begin to comprehend. Don't apologize for something you didn't do. No one really knows how anything is going to turn out in this life. As much as I miss him, Oskar missed him more. It took him 3 or 4 days just to come back into the house to sleep at night, and it's been very rainy and cold these past few days. Death usually comes in three's. First my two birds, now No Name. He was old, he was sick, and I'd like to think he's in a better place now, not suffering, yet I do hope he knows that we love him, miss him, and thank him for enriching our lives with his 13 years of life.
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10-09-2005
Anthony Lane Stahlhut
This is a sad story, but you telling it will help others. When someone tells you they are going to do this they want you to help. If you just knew it might be best to tell any adult that you trust and ask them for their guidance! Usually it is better to be thought of as different with friends, than quiet without Friends! Don't be hard on yourself we all have to learn somehow. You just had to learn the hard way. Now anyone that reads your work will know one answer! Anthony
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10-09-2005
Jack Curson
Leigh,
I would check the spelling of the write. But there is a interesting message being expressed. I am wondering what exactly you mean by why didn't I say? Was it a premonition? Do you believe you have a third eye? Interesting?
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