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lol, cute. I thought this poem was adorable and struck me interesting when you said "Now all I need is my baby boy and hedgehog." I was thinking a little "somebody needs a bf..." thank god you explained it. lol
Hedgehog and I thought kids were cruel when I was in school! LOL He better be real cute or something. We all need many things in life, but we don't always get them. Be happy with what you have and always strive for more. Better Days are just around the corner. We need you here at P-N-P, who would read my stuff if you weren't here? Anthony
A true feeling of nostalgia is expressed by the lines in this poem. You were not darker, you were younger, less responsibility and more daring in your life. Now you've matured and must do what's right for your family. Your poem expresses these anxieties in a very mellow, yet conclusive manner. Great imagery and wonderful flow is all that matters to me. This poem has it. If you question your lack of anger, it means that you have healed and have learned to forgive. Great poem.
I know the feeling, I have ran away from home all my life and couldn't wait to leave them and now I am 27 years old and just moved back into my parents house and I almost killed myself getting here. But I have been here two weeks and I remember why I left in the first place and I am leaving again, but still, it is a comfort to know all is the same somewhere. Great write, good job, thank you
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