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Sounds like I'm missing the bandwagon on this one. Feather's flying, I better get on! What other links/poems are related?
AND as for this work, it flows and bounces beautifully. Sometimes I am happy just to be reading your work, sometimes the thoughts and images make me smile, and every once in awhile they take me to another place and time and I forget I'm reading your work at all. This was one of those time. Kudos!
I don't know which is best, reading the actual poem or the feedback it invoked! OK, I've got to investigate this 'Roy" person. I don't want to be left out of the loop.
I see Tiffany is handing out cookies for good work; you must have gotten a few.
You can carry them on Roy's 'burro'. I agree with the spelling issue.. Roger is right.
Good job Anthony. I really enjoyed it. You took child's play and made history with it!
This was very sweet and a lot of fun at the same time...Roy does seem to be getting around in some other poems, but this little Roy is fine right here. Really nice imagery and exactly how little boys fight their imaginary foes today, also....David, you know very well that Heather is happily retired!
This is a interesting poem it rhymes well and flows nicely, no spelling mistakes. Also you have a very interesting choice of picture. keep up the good work
I actually truly enjoyed this poem. I was able to see Roy riding his, I think you meant, "burro," which is donkey in Spanish. The word burrow is a totally different thing. A burro may burrow, but a burrow is not a burro! Anyway, I saw the draw-bridge, the castle, and actually felt as if I was there. Your rhyming, for the most part, is very good in this poem. I think your last stanza is a bit forced, but it's good nonetheless! Very nicely done, Anthony Mattingly!
You always write so well. I've seen the name "Roy" a few times, here and there, though I haven't figured out what the connection is, and haven't read some of the other poems with the name mentioned. Is there a connection?
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