Eternal Night
by
Tiffany Forster
(Age: 21)
copyright 10-24-2005
Age Rating: 13 to 127
Sing me a song
Weave me a tale
Tell me a story
Of courage un-failed
Show me the world
Of glory and fight
Tell me of battles
That defeated the light
Speak of the valor
The courage and bite
Of shadows and daemons
With wondrous might
Sing me a story
Tell me a tale
Where ever it is
I shall be there
Show me the worlds
Of courage and might
Tell me of daemons
That took up the fight
Torch me a song
Sing me to life
Show me courage
Through battle and strife
Show me the glory
Of vanquishing light
Give me the story
Of Eternal Night
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This was a very good poem. It did have a little darkness, but it didn't have what I call darkness. Yes, there were a few places where it talked like 'Ansem' at the end of the first Kingdom Hearts, but hey. I liked how it kept repeating "Sing me a song, tall me a tale." but changes ever so slightly every time. Then it goes on about different fights, possibly the struggles the world is having. Then it might have effected you or someone you love in some way, and it changed your lives to somehow the worst, but not too bad. It had a wonderful rhyme scheme, nothing seemed forced; either you took your time, or it came from deep in your heart. Well, on to another poem. Talk to you later.
~Alma H.
I came back to read this again. It has always been one of my favorite poems. It has such beautiful rhythm -rolls off the tip of my tongue soooooo smoothly.
A poem that inspires one to adventure, full of action, impact and energy.
It's like asking the mysterious universe to reveal itself to you in all of it's glory.
Thanks for writing this.
~dubs her Duchess of Lancaster~
~presents her with a cantering white steed~
This is a great example of great rhythm, beautiful words, and a great story. ~applauds~
This is truly one of your best. I really got into this. It brought out my masculinity ~shifts eyes~^_^.
Thank you for the points, and for this nice poem Gothic seems to be your style; swords sorcerers, Conan the warrior, brings to mind Conan the usurper. I shall post one of my older works, perhaps you will enjoy - Death Knell. But for this wonderful poem of yours I would not put it up. Sword and sorcery has always been my favorite.
An achieving piece of writing, you must have thought hard on this one. Dark and mystifying, yet mildly scary... fairytale like. I would like to see more.
A beautiful piece of poetry. Extremely weii-written. Has a nice hunting ringing quality to it.
This is truly wonderful. Are you really crying out for those "Once upon a time,,,,," stories?
wow i loved this...it has a almost childlike innocence to it... and makes me long for those childhood days when reading stories/poems of great advantage were all we needed to make us smile..
great job..i also like the tone you used...the singsong quality made my ears sing.
Very well put! I love your style. and with Jean, I too long for the tales you seek!
Your words tell a tale of 'Tiffany' as well. It's very easy to get into your mood with you.
I like that. Looking forward to more of it, or whatever mood you feel like writing!
Well done. Debbie
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