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Virgins and Icons
by Roger Crique (Age: 51)
copyright 10-18-2005


Age Rating: 10 to 127

 
So, what is really going on?
One after another, they whirl
Pushing their weight about
Gigantic fiends that bear human names

Scary and unpredictable they are
They seem to know their way
Do you feel alone in their wake?
Do you pray not to be in their trail?

Pray, pray hard!
Pray, but not to the wind
Pray, but not to the sun
For the sun will be extinguished in six days

Don’t pray to the mountains
They can only blow their summit
Pray not to virgins
For they shall not deliver you

When you hear the freight train
Move out of its way
Unless it’s upon you
as will be his will, Yahweh’s!

When you see them coming
Remain in your stupor
For it will be fruitless your vacillation
When you hear their roar, do not hide

Open the door
For it shall not stand
Lest you’ll die in vain
imploring your virgins and icons!


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10-23-2005 Tiffany Forster    

I love this...I don't think I fully understand it, but I think that adds to my love of it. There is so much here to think about, and its a wonderful way to get a message across without being overly blunt.
-gives him a rainbow-chip cookie-


10-19-2005 Jean George    

Well Roger, you have certainly packed a lot to digest in a few words. You know, although, I do see a religious theme to this, I am more inclined to interpret it as involving the modern day icons of Political parties and government regimes and business cartels so huge they may as well be small powerful countries. The struggles for power involving these modern icons can certainly make me envision the future when these egocentric powers run amok...In fact it is so easy to envision sometimes, it scares me to death....A powerful poem, again with many layers.


10-19-2005 David Pekrul    

God's power and majesty is evident in the forces of nature. We feel powerless in return, but need to know that God is in control and it is Him to whom we should be praying, worshipping and giving thanks.
Virgins (religion) is not the answer, neither are icons (governments).



10-19-2005 James Shammas    

This is quite mysterious and thought provoking. Does anyone read Rilke, or is he too obscure and mystical for most people? In his first two of The Duino Elegies, he mentions angels as awesome and terrifying. Well, without elaborating too much, your poem evokes in me a similar sense of the awesome and unspeakable power of things we need to acknowledge in our lives, though what they are, I'm not sure. You've left me pondering just who these virgins and icons are, what they evoke, and how we must deal with them.
That's a start for me for now, though I will want and need to re-read this.

Jim


10-19-2005 Sage B.    

That was inthralling..I bit confusing but still very exciting!


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