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Shadows
by David Pekrul
copyright 10-19-2005


Age Rating: 10 to 127

 
I live in a world of shadows,
Behind these bars in my mind,
I long to walk in the sunlight,
But shadows just follow behind.

I live in a world of sorrow,
Behind these lines on my face,
I long to witness some gladness,
But sadness is left in its place.

I live in a world of heartache,
For someone who left me behind,
I long to feel her comfort,
But “lonely” is all I can find.

Sunlight and Gladness and Comfort,
Three ‘sisters’ I’m longing to see,
If they would just come here to visit,
I know I could really be free.




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11-13-2005 Mary -BrytEyz- Ball    

You have the uncanny ability to remove the reader from reading and take them to a place you've created in your mind and/or your heart. I love the journeys, each and every time.
10-25-2005 Tiffany Lent    

Wow, this is really cool! I really like how neat and nicely put it is -- very strait forward. Nice job!
10-23-2005 Tiffany Forster    

I like it. Not over done, yet not too simple, and it rhymes. Again I repeat with said statment of I like it! :D
10-19-2005 Jean George    

You have written a rather nice little poem here, David...It has depth rather than platitude and you are using some poetic devices I don't usually see in your writing. Your metaphors are not overly complex and they fit well with the simplicity of the meter and rhyming style, which, by the way, are very well done...None of your lines or rhymes seemed forced or out of place and you make your point, expand on it as needed and then you stop. The result is a lovely little poem of poignantly expressed sadness. Very impressive...I like it!...Jean
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