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Susan Brown
This is wonderful. I was pleased to see you brought it out (excellent timing-Autumn) as previously "somehow" I'd missed it.
Susan
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10-10-2007
BJ Niktabe
Congratulations on winning the contest with this wonderful piece! I know I praised it before, but that was then, and this is now, for now it is not just good, but a winner!
Besides, I still love it! :)
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10-02-2007
Richard Reed Jr
*****CONGRATULATIONS*****
for submitting the winning PnP poem in September.
I cannot remember a poem more richly deserving.
Every time I read it it seems to get better.
Great rhyming scheme, a haunting rhythm like that of Poe and a structure with a EAP lilt to it.
It has been on my fav's list for a long time.
fondly,
~Rich
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11-06-2006
Neb Tanner
Wow! I am taken aback! I absolutely love this poem! The imagery is spectacular and just the wording is awesome.
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10-11-2006
BJ Niktabe
This is an absolutely beautiful write! The way you put your words together paint a wonderful picture in my mind. Your talent shines through very strong in this one. Awesome!
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10-10-2006
Richard Reed Jr
Beautiful imagery here and the story of struggle through adversity is great. This is one of your best poems - a classic, worthy of Poe himself.
Bravo!
Sleep tight!
Rich
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09-12-2006
Alysyn Ayrica Bourque
Wonderfully brooding, yet hopeful in it's undertone. A beautifully commemorative Poe-etic style (sorry, couldn't pass up the opportunity...).
I would only change the words "sleep" to "sleeps", as it is grammatically more correct in the structure in which you are using it ("sleeps he not" is the same as "he sleeps not". See how that works?)
I'm a Poe fan, so this was certainly appealing and enjoyable. Thank you, Deborah.
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11-07-2005
Jeniffer Brand
Debbie, this was a very wonderful write!!!! I love reading things I can almost relate too! Thank you for writing that!
Jeniffer
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10-28-2005
Jean George
I really do like this one Debby...Your meter, rhythm and rhyme pattern is terrific. I also like the Poe-ish influence in your lines....I always believe that the nighttime lowers one's resistance to depression and that it is the time when one feels most vulnerable....It is so much harder to pretend that life is 'perfect' in the dark. You are an excellent addition to our poet's family with your originality of style and thought.
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10-26-2005
Tiffany Forster
-hands her a cookie-
Wow is all I can say...wow wow wow...
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10-26-2005
Brian Dickenson
Very occasionally I read a poem that stops me dead. This is such a poem.
Wonderful imagery and flow, it makes my efforts pale by comparison, I salute you as a poet.
Please let us have more.
Brian.
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10-25-2005
Roger Crique
Ah, Edgar, my Poe! This is absolutely brilliant! It is intricate, filled with insightful clues of dead of night. Exquisite imagery, and daring flow, for the words you employ can easily trip the swiftest of tongues. Vincent Price, my foot! I would love to hear Edgar himself orate this Masterpiece! Little by little, you are exhibiting the talent that I knew you had. I saw it the minute I read your work. But you showed restraint and I think I know why! I'm impressed Debbie! I absolutely love this poem!
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