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Candyland
by David Pekrul
copyright 10-26-2005


Age Rating: 4 to 127

 
Walking by a candy shop,
The sight of gumdrops made me stop,
And with a penny in my hand,
I entered into Candyland.

The smell of chocolate was distinct,
And then a sight caused me to blink,
As if in answer to my prayers,
I saw a million chocolate bears.

Some were dark and some were light,
And some were very, very white,
Some were standing six feet tall,
And some were very, very small.

Some were wide and some were thin,
Some wore frowns and some wore grins,
Some were round and some were flat,
Some wore shoes and some wore hats.

I was rather mystified,
I could not quite believe my eyes,
But when they all began to dance,
I walked right in and took a chance.

I danced with one and then with two,
Then three with hats and one with shoes,
I was the belle of Candyland,
My life was chocolaty and grand.

But visions faded into night,
When I awoke and saw my plight,
My chocolate vision was a dream,
So I got up and had ice-cream.


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11-09-2005 Debra Rose    

David...I saw you in a dream, as YOU, walking in...and being swept off of your feet by these dancing chocoalte bears, and then I saw you in a dress when you mentioned you were the "belle" of candyland! LOL! I'm sorry...it was just the most odd image to see. You're one of my favorite people, you know that? ^_^

This is such a fun, and wonderful work, and the way it ended made me laugh


10-29-2005 William Stage    

brings back memeories of going with my mom and if i was good i get whoppers malted balls

thanks for the memory

well written


10-27-2005 Anthony Lane Stahlhut    

Of course it was chocolate, we don't like green eggs and ham, Sam I am! This was really cute, your inner child at work. Anthony


10-26-2005 Tiffany Forster    

Hahaha, I like it! It makes me think of Charlie and the Chocolate Factory, its so light and funny. So does that mean I should hand you chocolate, or ice cream? Hmm...
-hands him chocolate ice cream-


10-26-2005 Toni Sweeney    

LOL!! To bad this was just a dream. That sounds so good right now. Keep up the great job. What kind of ice cream did you have. Was it chocolate.
Toni Sweeney


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