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"And here I try,
failing miserably,
to translate
my love for you"
I loved this! I always wondered ways to tell someone how you can't truly say how much you love them. This was a briliant poem, Paula. I really liked it. I hope you're still doing good. Missed you all. =) Keep in touch!!
Very nice. :) I'm more of a dark person but I enjoyed reading this. I though you were talking about being "in love" at first... Call me dense, or call me a girl who has her first boyfriend. :D I more dark then normal people, but I still enjoy reading your works. This is a heart felt poem, which I read a while ago and forgot to comment on. Sadly, I can't realte. I'm sure the love between sisters is a beautiful and nice thing though. Keep up the good work!
Very beautiful poetry. I loved how you changed meter about halfway through and didn't rely on rhyming like many of us young authors, nor did you simply throw a bunch of words together. The words have a flow to them, not staccato or confusing. I wasn't blown away, however; I have seen many poems on a topic like this before. But it was still a very good poem. Good job!
Its really nice to have a relationship with someone that you feel safe with. When love is returned it feels even more wonderful to have given it. To many never let anyone really see who they are, hoping that they can stop from being hurt! To have loved and lost is truly better than not feeling it at all! Good write! Anthony
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