Castle Of Mist
by
Leigh G.
(Age: 14)
copyright 10-30-2005
Age Rating: 7 to 127
This is mega weird, I remembered a dream I had over 5 years ago. Today 10/30/2005. I was playing Ratchet Deadlocked, I haven't finished it either. That's not the point listen to the untold story I'm telling. In another world. A world of dream.
I was staining on one of the many white pillars. They were all over. Under me there was a deep cesium. If I fell I was dead. There were many of the broken white stone pillars spread in path to a hung castle. A strange mist was swirling around, the pedestal I stand on, and hid the most of the castle. A Castle Of Mist. There is a mountain beside, me. With a road swirling around it. My family wait for me around the corner. My mind, tells me to go to them, safety, love. And my heart and soul tell me I must reach the castle. My very life depends on it. I see it so far away. My body is my own not that of a small child. I know if I leave were I am not I will not return to this place for over 5 years. I need to get to the castle. It has what I want. And need. I don't know what it is, but I must have it. I stand there starring at it knowing I would only sleep in the back of a tiny girls soul, heart, and mind, till the day my body now matches what it one day will be. I'm all ready being called back to that place, locked away. I can only hope that I will one day return to this place. And reach the Castle Of Mist. I that if I do not remember this my body, mind, heart, and soul will remain out of true power. The possible power I could have. I must awaken some day. I must reach the Castle Of Mist. I need what is there. I feel myself becoming in substantial, and being pulled back to the being of a unison, easy to believe, spiritually sensitive, child. I begin to fall back. I feel my arm, legs, and torso shrink. My mussels and chest flatten. And I am sleeping in wait again. And all of my very being is telling me I must reach The Castle Of Mist.
The face that I even remembered this really surprised me. But ever since I did I want to get to that Castle. And I have been longing some thing. And the girl in my dream all those years ago is me now. How I look, think, feel, and spiritually feel. I didn't remember then but I do now. And I know in another dream I have I must reach that castle. And ever since I remembered this I've felt more spiritually powerful. And just like in the dream ever part of my being is telling me to get to that castle. The Castle Of Mist.
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Not a bad job... so this Castle of Mist is supposed to represent some hidden power that you need? I daydream about a Mega Man X capsule containing something I must reach, but I never find out what. Anyway, aside from a few editing issues, you did fairly well with this. I hope you find what you are seeking...
That's what I would call a prophetic dream. I have those almost every night. Everything I do, I have a dream about it first. For instancce, one
night, I dreamed my brother slipped and fell in front of the front door. When I woke up and went downstairs, my brother was going out to get the mail, and he slipped and fell in front of the front door. But this is more deep. Some editing needed, but on the whole, this work deserves applause! *applauding*
Just a thing to think about Anthony, I think that trail of bread crumbs is from 'Hansel and Gretel' from the Grimms Fariy Tales.
Just some things for you too Leigh! ^.^
'I was staining..' should be 'I was standing'
'..there was a deep cesium', I think you meant 'chasam'.
In your conclusion 'the face that i remembered' should be 'the FACT that I remembered'
All in all though, this was a really good read!!! I have dreams like that too sometimes. Wanna know something totally wierd? Sometimes my dreams are anime based. I dreamt about Naruto one night, riding on Pegusus (from Sailor Moon), Inuyasha on another...it's really wierd. Not as wierd as the time I dreamt I couldn't sleep...but oh well. I've gotten off topic. This was a really good read. Write more things on dreams you've had!
Leave a trail of bread crumbs. That way you will be able to find your way back. I heard that somewhere, I can't remember where!
"The Castle of Mist" Does it exist?
Why should I go,yet my soul insists.
I'm being pulled in, but in which direction?
My family one way, the other perfection.
A terrible dilemma, yet answers to find.
Is it real? or am I out of my mind?
Good luck with your dilemma and let us know what you find! ( This would be worth more points if you fix the typo's and spelling!)Anthony
Welcome !
