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11-15-2005
Sage Bruce
wow..I can feel the mood in this poem. It's like caring,loving but sad. Like knowing an end will come but still loving the person all the same. I can see you doing all the things you've described its a very good poem... Good job!
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11-07-2005
Deborah Thomas
I'm still trying to see another meaning.. Someone you will love until death? You found, what? An adulterous situation? She signed away your life, with what? A divorce? But you will still love her until death...
Are you laughing at me yet, Roger, for even trying to figure this one out?
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11-07-2005
Deborah Thomas
Of course, this probably has an entirely different meaning; you are so good at hiding your meaning until explained then all is clear!
I hope it has another meaning, Roger... for your sake.
I see you walking into a room where some has died.. or perhaps you held their hand as they slipped away.. you close their eyes as they sleep. Not as simple as that, though.. this person was very close to you. Someone who brought joy in your life. It's too soon, now, but you will smile again.
Tell me that you have tricked us again, Roger!
Reina's Mom, Debbie
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11-03-2005
David Pekrul
Roger, another mysterious, yet well-written piece. I'm still trying to figure out the last one I read. You're too deep for me man, but don't let that stop you. Keep 'em coming.
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