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11-05-2006
Richard Reed Jr
A very open, honest piece and even though dark, a darkness we can all relate toe.
The flow was very smooth and rhythmical.
Hope all has been well with you and Leigh-Chan,
Rich
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01-10-2006
Mika Lee
nice poem! I like it its dark >D
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12-17-2005
Leigh Gilholm Fisher
You win second place in my contest Darkness!
Thank you for entering!
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12-02-2005
Haley Robinson
Hey Mehrina,
Though I may not be a fan of dark stuff, I've got to admit, this poem's pretty good. Nice Job!
~haley
p.s. I'm not a big fan of the last word though, but that's just me, and, I don't curse so you know, I am kinda hard about that one factor...
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11-11-2005
Leigh Gilholm Fisher
Wonderful! So dark, I thrive on it! So wonderful, darkness true darkness. The way you wrote this is amazing! Each line is telling a little story of it's own. Short, but very nice... I couldn't write something so good when I was new for the life of me! I mostly do the darkest thinks I can now. Some of the stuff I've been witting about being futile and death is down right evil. No sweat about the last line, I use the word hell in quite a few poems. Either way. This is wonderful poem I love at and can't wait to read more of yours. And also all the spelling and grammar is perfect also. You're a really great dark writer and they way you write is also great. You should do more dark poems, that's your best if you ask me. Them again that might just be because I love dark poems. Great work!
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