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David,
I LOVED the use of alliteration in this peom. It's amazing! I love finally getting a chance to come back online and read all these treasures you all have put out. Great job!! It's such a great twister!
Thank you David, I do like to start the day with a smile, and this did it for me.
It also painted a vivid picture, a Lewis Carroll type of scene.
One small point.
With regard to Willy Warthog, was it ware, or wear?
Brian
Meter and rhythm are very good and the rhyming pattern is unforced and rolls off the tongue with ease. A wonderfully, witty wisp of whimsy...I love that 'w' was used for the alliteration, it is a letter with a full and exuberant sound which adds to the fun as it also works wonderfully well read aloud. Very clever and I think I detect a bit of a sly comment about human nature among the twists and turns of the tongue.
Wow Wilbur, this was wonderful. Would be hard to write with all those W's. Wonderful and witty,wasn't what I would have written, but thats why we're wanting to read new writes! Anthony
Welcome !
