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Progression

by Anthony Lane Stahlhut (Age: 52)
copyright 11-10-2005


Age Rating: 7 +
Progression


Daddy said I'm a big boy now,
That I'm five years old.
I know how to clean my room,
without being told.
I can't wait until I'm six,
how big will I be?
I'll even learn to ride my bike,
just you wait and see.

Tomorrow is my birthday
and I will be fifteen.
I think school is such a drag,
you know what I mean?
I need to get me a job
so I can get a car.
They're hiring way down on main,
but don't want to walk that far.

I wish I'd gone to college, dad.
Just like you had said.
I just wouldn't listen,
couldn't get it through my head.
I already made mistakes.
I'm lucky to be alive.
I hoped that I'd be famous,
when I was twenty-five.

Seems like things are changing, dad.
I finally found a girl.
She loves me like I love her,
to me she is my world.
So many things happening,
can't believe I'm thirty-five.
Things are good, like you said they would.
I'm glad I took the dive.

My hair has started turning gray.
I am really feeling old.
Gray makes us look distinguished,
at least that's what I'm told.
So on this day in November,
everyone will see.
A cake with many candles,
saying happy forty-fifth to me!
(November 10, 1960)






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        12-27-2005     Emily Garwood        

HAPPY BIRTHDAY (for then i mean) i'0m a bit late reading this now lol your birthday is in the same month as my boyfriends but 12 days before his lol this is a good poem may you enjoy many more years

Emy

        12-06-2005     James Shammas        

Clever title and well done, though I found the rhythm a little clumsy compared to your usual mastery of rhyme, rhythm and meter.
And happy birthday!

Jim

        12-05-2005     Ernest Lozon        

Fantastic piece of work you did putting this whole poem together. The flow was excellent from start to finish and you applied the rhythm and rhyme scheme perfectly. A great story was told and you told it very well explaining the aging process and the ups and downs we all go through along the way. I could fit in this story quite well but now I'm retired and enjoying my relaxed life very much. Good work and much enjoyed.

        11-13-2005     Deborah Thomas        

I was noticing the other day that your page says you are a year older.
Happy Birthday, Anthony Lane!
I hope you had a good one.
I love the way you went into each stanza.. without warning, you are a decade older.. kinda the way it feels when you look back.

        11-13-2005     Mary -BrytEyz- Ball        

Life has a way
of making us look back
Regretting many choices
or all the things we lack

But we're really strong
we'll manage to fight back
and concentrate on the good
and have an optimistic knack

Life's so full of bad AND good
why choose to look at only one
Look at both and then go on
grateful for the weighty sum

        11-13-2005     Deone Wiley        

Clever "progression" of thought and different way of telling a ballad. I assume this is autobiographical Nice. One spelling comment--
their hiring should be they're hiring.

        11-10-2005     David Pekrul        

Happy Birthday, Anthony,
Another year has passed,
I hope you have a party,
And I hope it is a blast.

I know I’d be invited,
If it wasn’t very far,
But I would have to fly down there,
I wouldn’t drive my car.

So celebrate without me,
And I’ll think of you from here,
I hope this year is good to you,
And brings you lots of cheer.






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