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11-14-2005
Deborah Thomas
Do I sense a wake-up call to all who bang their own drum so loudly that they can not hear the choir?
Lord, keep me close to You that I will always feel Your presence. Open my ears to hear Your voice, and not my own. For it will not be my own voice that calls me on that day.. and I do so want to go home. Do not leave me behind, whatever the cost! Amen!
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11-13-2005
Kat Voletto
I really liked this piece. Though I am not myself a Christian, I have made it a point to study other religions and know the Christian doctrines and teachings well. This could truly a page out of a new bible, or a (further) addition to the old. Very well written; I would suggest changing "trod on" to "trod upon". Keep up the excellent work!
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11-13-2005
Walter Jones
He stopped to taste the reality, and lost the mind that gave him difference, Dante screamed the truth is you, both your heaven and your hell, touch her with your eyes, and love her in your mind, the soul wanders time forever if you be immortal, was that not what we became. Fantastic write.. Walt
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11-11-2005
David Pekrul
This reminds me of two verses in scripture.
"Pride goeth before destruction, and an haughty spirit before a fall." Proverbs 16:18
And to summarize Ezekiel 18:11-13
"He that...hath oppressed the poor and needy, hath spoiled by violence....he shall surely die; his blood shall be upon him."
Another great write from our 'modern prophet'.
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