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Through Eyes Of Love
by David Pekrul
copyright 11-10-2005


Age Rating: 10 to 127

  Through Eyes Of Love
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Looking through the eyes of love,
I'll tell you what I see,
I see an angel standing there,
Who's looking back at me.

The sun is in her radiance,
The moon is in her eyes,
So when she stops to talk to me,
Imagine my surprise.

I'm feeling kind of dizzy, as
I try to say hello,
My mind is rushing frantically,
But words are coming slow.

I feel like such an idiot,
To stand there as I stare,
But words that I would like to speak,
Won't get me anywhere.

So, with a sigh and some relief,
I hear what's on her mind,
Directions to the airport,
And I tell her, "Highway nine".


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01-14-2006 Lonnie Kornoely    

This is great it shows how some of us get so worked up and have great things on our mind to say but all we can do is stuble threw saying anything. I liked this has a good flow great job
01-08-2006 Jen Bry    

Very beautiful poem. I liked reading it because it reminds about some of the compliments my boyfriend gives to me.
11-11-2005 Anthony Lane Stahlhut    

I swore I'd never do this, but I forgot your points!
11-11-2005 Anthony Lane Stahlhut    

This reminds me of the scene in shows where the geek is looking at a beautiful woman looking his way, she blows a kiss and he almost falls out of his chair. She gets up and starts walking his way. She get close and he is trembling....and she walks past him to a man right behind him and he's crushed. Good write I liked the read, Anthony
11-11-2005 Paul Gardner    

I liked the way you rhymed it.The first and last lines are the most inportant of them all,this poem
has that.Great poem.Paul
11-11-2005 Roger Crique    

You should have gone after her, David! nice rhyming and an unexpected ending! Did you get a phone number? :)
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