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Really cute! I love cats, and I agree; most of the time a cat is easier to love than a person. Of course, when that cat can talk... Anyway, nice poem, nice rhyme scheme, keep writing!
Megan
It seems you found your pace in this piece after the third stanza. I love the contrasting emotional humor you evoke in the reader by preferring her cat's companionship over that of another human. Of course, there is no comparison, but in the absence of loving companionship sometimes the love of a pet can be strangely comforting.
ahhhhh i love luna... i have a stuffed luna and i use to sleep with it intil i got real kitties off my own.. and your right...aside from para-para's snobby behavior...she has this thing bout attacking me if even look at her...LC and her really love me...or at least when i feedf them. lol..
anyways i loved how your poem talked bout the complex relationship between these two, how they depend on eachother and the picture is perfect.
I have more to add, thanks to Alma for requesting it be made longer, but I cannot edit in contest.
So, the rest will have to wait until after December 08.
Debbie
Very well done. The picture and the poem go great together and this would be a great edition to a children's book as I really think they would love to read this one as well as look at the picture. Great work. I enjoyed very much.
I agree with everyone else. The picture fits and the poem is so cute! I actually had a black cat that I named Luna once. He and I always scrapped cuz he'd get into his kitty treats all the time when I wasn't looking. But he loved me. :)
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