Seasons- A Sonnet
by
Sammy A.
(Age: 17)
copyright 08-31-2007
Age Rating: 4 to 127
Summer's sun rests in the sky, warms the eart
Until its wind blows the cold autumn in,
Changes the scenery in the year's girth
Giving the land a lovely abstraction.
Soon, instead of red leaves that hit the dirt,
To the ground freezing flakes of snow will fall;
Nearly everything will become inert;
Life will be caught in the cold winter's thrall.
Now what is this that forms below my feet?
The fresh green gives a sense of life anew
Spring's the thaw that makes water if the sleet
Adding to that sense is the sky, so blue
Once again, summer is here before me
And the seasons go on, with apathy
--Sammy A.
I would like to thank Jordan Screws for helping me with this sonnet. He stayed up until nearly midnight helping me write this thing!
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very very nice, this was most certainly a marvelous piece.
now im not sure but in my english rules, it told me u can never use to semi colons in one sentence, of course there are exceptions to every rule, but i still think you should check.
Soon, instead of red leaves that hit the dirt,
To the ground freezing flakes of snow will fall;
Nearly everything will become inert;
ok so anyway away with the bad and in with the good. this was very beautiful, i love how you describe the most beautiful yet ordinarry things and make them so they are extroardinary, and beautiful.
Up in the mountains this happens all so fast its like we skip seasons and yet throw them all together really fast. of course you have to tie love in there =)
but yah its just like love, it changes with the seasons
good job
Antha
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