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Broken Music
by Kimberly Angelone (Age: 38)
copyright 11-29-2005


Age Rating: 10 to 127

 
His deep sensitive eyes play my heartstrings like no other.

I look right through them and I can hear the music play.

I touch him with a love that is soft and wanting and rock him slowly….he barely notices and he is a big part of the peak.

I wait for a sign, any sign, but I will sooner grow gray hair and wrinkles.

I thought I saw traces of something once….but I was in deep, deep denial.

I cry with no tears and beg with my vulnerability and scream without a sound...he doesn’t even notice.

I know I have enough love to last us both a lifetime. But he laughs at me because he doesn't have a handle on it.

He motions me away like a gnat with his words and expressions.

My words and love fall on deaf ears, and I am broken.


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03-05-2008 Eric Gasparich    

Aww, who hasn't experienced this. For some, it's not an occurrence, but a way of life.

In this, I see yet again some fudging of transitive and intransitive states, so I have to assume it is part of the way you write. I'm not sure if the effect is to make it more poetic or not, at least in any conventional sense. Of course, I am something of a yokel and a literalist / conventionalist, so I'll have to think further on that.

One thing for sure, you always touch on common human experiences, and that is always solid and trenchant trait to have. As Terentius said, Homo sum: humani nil a me alienum puto- I am human, nothing human is alien to me.
12-07-2005 David Pekrul    

This paints such a sad picture. This is well written, I just hope it is fiction and not from personal experience.
Once small critique:
"But he laughs at me because he doesn't have a handle on it." This sentence should not start with the word 'but'. This sentence should be a continuation of the sentence prior to it.



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