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Everybody's Lovepoem
by Mona Boscu (Age: 21)
copyright 12-04-2005
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Age Rating: 13 to 127

 
Can you Love someone too much,
Longing for a tender touch?
Can you hear a whisper from your heart,
Telling you we'll never be apart?

Can you be longing for an ungiven kiss,
Knowing it's so hard to miss?
Can you know where we two belong,
Listening endlessly to our favourite song?

Can you love someone enough to let go,
Letting his/her love for someone else grow?
Can you say an honest goodbye,
To a love that will never die?

Yes, you can do all this,
If love caught you with its bliss!


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12-16-2005 Richard Reed Jr    

Mona,

This is marvelous except for the second line, third verse and that's my favorite or favourite
verse. It doesn't look hard to change and it would make a world of difference.

Letting someone go takes courage and also makes a world of difference. Here's to you!

Thanks and Happy Holidays,

Rich




12-06-2005 Roger Crique    

Mona, I sincerely apologize to you for erroneously believing that the word favourite was misspelled. I looked it up in the dictionary and did not find it. But my brother David pulled my ear and taught me a thing or two. You went up a notch! Take care and I hope you accept my apologies!


12-06-2005 David Pekrul    

This is a very touching poem with great feelings. It is well written, asking many questions, some that many never be able to be answered.
Referring to Roger's comments, no, you did not spell 'favourite' incorrectly. The spelling you used is the British/Canadian spelling and is quite correct.


12-05-2005 Roger Crique    

Many questions needing answers, answers that hopefully we will be able to answer! Like Jean said, a few minor fixings are in order. You misspelled the word, favorite. In your title, lovepoem is two words, love poem. "Letting his/her love for someone else grow?" I would not use, his/her, It is more appropriate to say, "Letting love for someone else grow." and "If love caught you with it's bliss!" It's is supposed to be its. If you work on these things, your poem would flow better and would deliver a more effective message. Welcome to PnP!




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