Judgement Day
by
Angela Toshner
(Age: 18)
copyright 12-05-2005
Age Rating: 10 to 127
Tis hard,
This road unpaved,
The dangers of perish,
Shall curse thy day.
One falter of step,
Shall bring thy end.
But till that day,
Let none be condemned.
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Wow great job I love the language you used it makes it sound really awesome. Your poem has a good message, too. too many people die fo doing nothing and too many people get away wih killing. The world isn't hard enough on those people, their just lazy. Anyway, great job I loved it!
Very interesting, good work! I like it. It's a bit confusing I places but it's a very hard to describe topic and you do it well. The unknown and unexplainable. Dark too! :D