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The Sun Awoke and So Did I
by Marilyn Mackenzie (Age: 56)
copyright 10-01-2001


Age Rating: 7 to 127

 
The Sun Awoke and So Did I
by Marilyn Wilkerson



A bright orange and yellow light
Peered from its bed
Above the mountains and trees
And I watched it
From the window in my room

A bright orange and yellow light
Streaked with shades of red
Climbed upwards in the sky
And I watched it
From the window in my room

A bright orange and yellow light
Awoke gradually from the dead
And danced and glittered in the lake
And I watched it
From the window in my room

The sun awoke in the sky
And sprinkled light on the early morn
It filtered through the window in my room
And I awoke and began another day
Destined to share sunshine
With all who dare to receive

Do you dare?


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03-12-2007 Leigh G.    

Good work! I liked this poem, it really painted a picture in my mind and told me a story. I like poem that tell stories, especially when I don't have to rant about capitals and punctuation. :) I didn't find one typo here! Huzzah! I drive people nuts with all my ranting about capitals...I had to submit an explanatory story just to calm the angry mob that was forming! By the way, thanks for your comment on that story! :) The only thing that bothered me about this poem was the lack of feedback...only one comment? It wasn't even a comment! One line isn't a comment! Eh, best I don't get into all that rambling! Back on topic: I can tell you worked on this one to make sure it came out well, and you did a good job of it. This is a great piece, keep 'em coming!

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04-03-2003 Janet Owenby    

Another Great poem.
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