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Broken Wings
by Tiffany Forster (Age: 21)
copyright 01-23-2006


Age Rating: 13 to 127

 
With broken wings you’ll learn to fly
To live, to laugh, to learn, to try
Your tarnished halo of fals’d gold
Will shine as bright as the stars so old
With tattered dress of grey and grit
Upon a throne of white you’ll sit
Your knotted hair of hapless grey
Will, in the scented breezes, sway
With cluttered words on a clumsy tongue
You’ll give inspiration to old and young
Your dimming eyes of blue-grey frost
Will entrance the princes and make them lost
With broken wings you’ll learn to fly
To live, to laugh, to learn, to die.


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05-25-2006 Anthony Donnaville    

Woah. Wonderfully written.
05-02-2006 Anne-marie Hewlett    

I love this poem. It has a nice flow and rhythm.
02-19-2006 Daniel R Patton    

This is undeniably art
02-17-2006 Richard Reed Jr    

~Did you bump your head when you fell out of heaven?~

Bravo! That's a really good poem in every way. Most entertaining, great rhythm*, good rhymes.
VEry inspirational. What's this: "fals’d"- poetic license?

~Gives her a dictionary and deducts 10 points from her scrabble score~

Rich
02-06-2006 Veera Das    

A good poem. It has a definite rhyme, rhythm and an enigmatic (uplifting?) theme.I especially love how you repeat the first two lines at the end to lend power to the entire piece.By changing the word 'try' to 'die' at the end, are you reprogramming the optimism note of the poem, by hinting that death wins in the end?
May be a typo in line 6 -did you mean 'while?' or 'white'?
A little more editing would render it perfect.
01-23-2006 Lisa A.    

This is so emo/goth at the beginning, but towards the end the meaning becomes more clear and beautiful! The last lines are so heart felt ^.^
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