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wow. This is just...I don't know what to say. It's amazing because it's only one verse. But it's an excellent poem. I never thought that you could have a poem with only one verse and it still be a good poem. But I understand it perfectly and I relate to it so much. I'm sure a lot of people do. When you love someone but you don't know what to do and you think up that little bit of courage and think, what if? And you imagine what happens in your head but you just can't do it. This surprised me so much. I'm just speechless. I really enjoyed it. Thank you for giving me the pleasure of being able to read it. I think this is my new favorite poem. Not even kidding. I can't even say how much this has touched me. Thank You.
~Cassie~
Okay Debra, I'm going to say this one time and one time alone that was the most loveliest poem that I have ever read in my life but it was also as cold and bitter as well. But I like it and it was great to. Please keep up the good work.
...Interesting. This is very short, can I rather cold and bitter when it comes to love, so I suppose I can't appreciate this as much as the others. Anyway, love can be something wonderful that could last forever, or it could be something pointless and painful that fades away. It can also lead to stress and mouth cancer, so I've learned. All my aunts and uncles are divorced, and my parents are soon on the way. Like I said, I'm bitter about love. Anyway, for a short little poem this was pretty good. I didn't feel like any real emotions were conveyed though, partly due to size. Good work though, keep writing.
Heh! That's cute! It reminds me of the Three Stooges, though I have no real clue why! I liked the last two lines the best. Would the person have slapped you and ran away or just woo under da fantastic` charme!!!! I also like how the last word of the first line and the last of the last line are both you. It adds emphasis, don't you think? Great job!
I have seen your photograph, how sultry. I also read quite a few of your works. I think anyone would be fortunate and feel themselves fortunate to be kissed by you. Fred
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