As Two Shooting Stars
by
Richard Reed Jr
copyright 02-21-2006
Age Rating: 10 to 127
As two silhouettes converge on a wall
caught up in bright crystal balls
turn into two dancing shadows
Whirling the evening away
Like music box figurines
Two strangers meet on a dance floor
As two shooting stars converging in night skies
Tied together by mutual attraction
Two eyes meet and hold so sweetly
As fingers entwine
And hearts combine
Two strangers converge as soul mates
As two trickling rivulets converge into one flowing stream
eventually emptying themselves into one tranquil sea
Of unfathomable loving depths
As friendship deepens
And dream-mist thickens
Two soul-mates converge as sweethearts
As discordant bird songs converge as melodic tune
Changing haphazard sounds into grand symphony
of beauteous music spread through the skies
As music in crescendo
Overcomes all shy inhibitions
Two sweethearts converge as lovers
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NOw this piece i really like....i believe all these things are possible love at first sight soul mates and all that every person is different and has their belifs but i have to say that somewhere in the world everyone has the right person waiting for them and when you least expect it....you bump into them it can be that simple lol....love your poem keep it up
No bad. I assumed you were a romantic guy long before now. This kinda goes against a few things I don't believe in. Soul mates, love at first site, and eternal love. Soul mates are bound to break up. Love at first site is irrational. And love fades like long-forgotten wallpaper that lingers on the wall of an old apartment. Sorry if my dark-levels are over ten, but I'm not much for positive words on the emotion of love. When the love you have for someone fades, you'll see the sides of them that you didn't see before. Because you didn't want to see them. Then when you look up hoping to see their shadow, all you see is a puddle of blood.
I "love" this! I really like romance especially the novels even though I've only read one, but they can really get you hooked, especially if you like to daydream about meeting your soul mate. This is well written and you can really right about this subject.Awesome job!