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06-09-2006
Jessica Peters
Wow this is really pretty. I love it! You do a really awesome job in all your poems they are so cool!
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04-21-2006
Elisabeth Hatheway
Lately I have been learning about the poetry type, the haiku. Personally I have found it to be very simple and yet astounding. The haiku is a challenging type of poetry to write about as what Roger has said but the smallest of words can leave you filled with pleasure and joy.
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12-19-2005
Roger Crique
I honestly do not like Haiku poetry. This is Haiku, right? Well, Haiku poetry leaves an empty space in my soul. But I must admit that you achieved your goal here. I easily felt the moisture and the pristine state of Nature when I read this poem. Good job, David!
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