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I don't know how I missed this one, but it reads like another 'Night Before Christmas'. This brings back fond memories except for the part about Father swilling beer. Liquor wasn't allowed in our house.
Hope you had a wonderful Christmas this year.
That really reminds me of the way i used to celebrate christmas (when i still lived in England) with all my family and close friend my sister, cousins and me calling out names of who all the presents belonged too and you're right all scrubbed and clean and dressed all nice. Oh and all the food wish she was still here to keep all the families going. Thank you for bringing back what i have been missing all these years i think i needed to remember. Good work
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Ahh! those were the day's, thanks for taking me back once again, if everyday could only be Christmas...Brian I'd be the poorest son-of-a gun in the world...but I'd be the happiest one too. This was fabulous, great flow.
I hope dad doesn't wake every morning with an aching head, but otherwise this was very nice! I miss your stories and you are a wonderful writer! Anthony
A festive and cheerful poem, depicting the nuances of Christmas and its effect on the mere mortals that succumb to its joy. The sixth stanza appears a bit forced. "Dashing back the way the came," did you mean, "...way they came?" Overall, the Christmas scene was nicely described, specially the sleepy-eyed children!