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11-01-2007
Deborah Thomas
Congratulations on winning the contest!
I have only read these twice, and already they are sounding like stories from long agao. Ageless; classical; amusing; a warm blanket.
Debbie
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05-05-2006
Regina Pate
dramatic changes in my head, my adrenolin rushing, my body frozen, emotions overflowing with no where to run, time stood still for just a moment, and then continued in a hurried rush as if it were late for it's next appointed moment, floods of memories, childhood, reflexion, nastalgia, and finally finding comfort in a freindly gesture. Great write, good job, thanks,
Gina
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04-27-2006
Kimberly Murphy
I loved all three. I laughed when I read, "What's to be done with all those damn boxes?" I thought was funny. I can't choose which one I liked the best, but if I had to, I would say, Whenever You Cry. I loved that one.
Kimberly Murphy
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03-25-2006
Mary -BrytEyz- Ball
I just tried a triolet myself and it's difficult to keep it from sounding too repetitive and to make the reader "feel" it... I think anyway. Your last of the three posted here definitely brought a smile to my face. Very good work and I'm glad you are part of our PNP family... we are truly blessed!
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03-22-2006
Jessica Peters
These are really good and really well written. I've also noticed that this style of writing is pretty unique and makes the poems very catchy!
Out of the three though I think I like "Whenever you Cry" the best because it has a lot of emotion running through it. Anywho, keep up the good work!
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03-14-2006
Nasir Shehu
that's a very good poem and i do appreciate the style and do want to know what's the style the poet used ? the title is wonderful too keep it up!
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03-14-2006
David Pekrul
What is this literary style? Does it have a name?
I really like it and you have done a good job with these. I would like to give this form a try.
Let me know the name of it so I can look it up and study it.
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