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08-13-2008
Frank Fields
I suppose, that for some of us, this work is very applicable and, hopefully, did in fact, reach out to touch all who read it and were inspired by your words to keep them in the forefront of their lives and activities.
I have to agree with Richard, however, that the 2nd stanza needed attention. It still seems to, for that matter. Ironically, or perhaps with some intended satire, it was its own stumbling block. ^^
Frank :)
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01-06-2006
Richard Reed Jr
As usual you have a great and loving message for us. If we read your poetry everyday, we would all be better persons. It was mostly a well-written poem, but I think the second stanza could be improved a bit in rhythm,
Rich
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12-27-2005
Emily Garwood
So everything that happens to us in life is like one or two blocks falling and we just have to suck it up and keep building the blocks to get to our future our destiny and survive in this world and as we build the blocks again solve the problem and accept it. It's a good way to learn in life and blocks is definatly one way to express the problems we have and the way to rebuild our lifes. Very good poem and well written thank you.
Emy
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12-27-2005
James Shammas
Yes, yes; God enters through the wounds and there's grace in suffering. If there wasn't, we wouldn't need Him; we'd all be perfect, without need for religion or spirituality. I'm glad to be part of the human race-- that there's spirituality in imperfection.
Thank you, Anthony, for reminding me.
Jim
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12-24-2005
David Pekrul
This should encourage us all to look forwards and not backwards. Christmas is a time of new beginnings. Let's remember God's gift to man; through Him we can make a new start.
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