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heya, ive necver read this one again...im maing my way through them al..theres so many hahahahaa....really nice poem. well we've alreadt lked about this lol so i wont repeat myself, you know what you have to do. theres just 2 things that i can see on the "you don`t care about this new family,
you just dont wanna lose the old" add a ' to the end of the wanna..you did it b4 but 4got it on that one...and add one after old.."you just don't wanna' lose the old one" sounds better.
Emily,
I failed to comment that there are numerous spelling errors in this write. Fixing those would certainly make the piece look and read better. I couldn't let you off the hook without mentioning that; I'm a stickler for correct spelling.
Quite often a parent or parents will get in the way of a marriage or relationship, and by doing so think they are helping. Your partner needs to understand this and put your needs first.
It is best not to try and change anyone, as changes in both people with automatically happen as you grow closer in love.
Like Roger said, I hope this is fiction, but if not, don't give up, work on the relationship and through much love it will work out.
This is sad and disturbing. I surely hope you're okay and pray that this is fiction. Your sentiments are truly felt and anguish is also evident. You recently commented on one of my poems and you mentioned that there are people who do not accept others for who they are. I totally agree with you on that statement. With that being said, I want you to remember that you are who you are and no one should try to change you. You could do that on your own. I hope that all is well and if not, ask God to guide you and your family. Take care, Roger.
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